Artist Reply: Many thanks John: are you interested also in poetry? if so, then please take a look (and comment) at the two that I have submitted. The second one became repeated like that when I tried twice to correct the non-increased line spacing between stanzas and also attempted to change the strange little squares that take the place of my proper punctuations: sorry about that!
Gwen.
Great piece of work here, I like the pose and the blend of the subject with the sheeted seat. The tones and brushwork are also very subtle. The only constructive criticism I can add is that the subjects arm that hangs down is ever so slightly the wrong shape. Not sure if it is the length of the forearm or the indent on the inside, just above the elbow .
Still this is a small thing that only notices when you are looking with a critical eye.
Good job
Artist Reply: Thank you for a very useful critique; in one way I do have to agree with your criticism of the arm, but the painting is not an accurate representation of a nude female figure, being more really a portrayal of a mood in what was intended to be an impressionistic manner, I perhaps should have made that clear: I may well attempt to do the same or similar picture in a more 'realism' style.
Many thanks again for your interest.
Artist Reply: This was somewhat different to much of my work, so I am very happy that it has pleased you; thank you.
I look forward to seeing some of your work tomorrow.
If you like abstract work, do check our the work of radfax.
nice flowing lines, i really like the pose, shows the subtle form of a womans body.
Artist Reply: How kind of you Vicente.
I will be looking at some member's art work later and will include yours in that tour: when next you look at some work, check out that of radfax - very interesting and intricate.
Artist Reply: Thank you very much Lawrence: I look forward to viewing some of your work later. Do look at the work of radfax, it was he who told me of this site: his work is quite stunning.
14 Comments
Maria Murphy 29 Aug 2007
great artOlga van Dijk 14 Apr 2007
I LOOOOVE this one... really unique!--John Swift 03 Apr 2007
I love this rendering. Striking!Cathie Brock 01 Apr 2007
A beautiful subtle painting Gwen...Cath xxJerry 28 Mar 2007
Very delightful!radfax radfax 25 Mar 2007
Great piece of work here, I like the pose and the blend of the subject with the sheeted seat. The tones and brushwork are also very subtle. The only constructive criticism I can add is that the subjects arm that hangs down is ever so slightly the wrong shape. Not sure if it is the length of the forearm or the indent on the inside, just above the elbow . Still this is a small thing that only notices when you are looking with a critical eye. Good jobCharles Jones 25 Mar 2007
Yes, a limited palatte can be very rewarding. Very moody, and, of course, the primary color adds to it. Delicately done. Even the blue hair works.William Boyer 25 Mar 2007
coolLaura Smith 25 Mar 2007
Excellent W/C portrait. Very nicely done!Emilio B. Campo-Diaz 25 Mar 2007
Lovely subtle work, I like it.Jean M. Laffitau 24 Mar 2007
Very beautiful and sensual work Gwen!Andrei Sorokin 24 Mar 2007
Thanks ,I love thatcolor and composition so much.Vicente Bea 24 Mar 2007
nice flowing lines, i really like the pose, shows the subtle form of a womans body.Lawrence Hickman 24 Mar 2007
intresting great job