THE RIBS OF MILAGRO copyright by Michael Forbus Miguel knew he was in trouble when his vessel, Milagro, hit the coral ridge. The boat he had built with his father sunk to the sand in seconds. He was able to salvage a small bit of tack and a keg of Barbados Rhum. A line or two and some canvas for covering at night he was able to salvage. Oh yes and the nugget of Green Apple Jade from another voyage. His lucky Jade. He still had joss with the Jade. He was now so bewildered. He had a disagreement with the Jade Princess before sun that morning about his liking the firey rum too much. She told him, Miguel, I just want you here awake with me, not asleep with the keg. His argument was that he had enough pain and that gave him relief. She left him go on the water with no hug, no kiss and he with his head hard like a stone left with words unspoken. And now Milagro sunk. The boat his father and him had built and named after the meeting of the two. Miguel and the Jade one. As the boat sank he grabbed the keg and some tack and a large piece of Jade she had given him that her grandfather had found. He has some line and no hope. As a survivor he went to work on a shelter right away and lay out a trot line for fish. He also carved a flute from the bamboo that surrouned him and daily he called the parrots in to roost. He then began to carve the Jade into a small Buddha that he has seen in the Orient on one of his cruises. He began to drink the rum as the storm came up and he slept in a wet and beaten shack and awoke with his head on fire. No food, just tack. No cover just fronds. He began to think of the Jade one and how she wou;d worry. She did not like the sea. She thought it stole husbands from their wives. Too many fathers from their offspring. She always thought Miguelito should farm and watch plants grow and learn what it means to nourish. Miguel's ribs looked like the bones of the boat and he was forlorn. He had no life without the Jade One. Daily he carved the piece of Green Apple Jade from her grandfather and made a flute with perfect pitch. At dusk he would call all the multi-colored parrots in and he would pray to the Jade Apple Buddha to save him that he might become the man that his Queen could look up to. He began to run up the beach aimlessley and try and get his muscle tone back. He had long ago thrown the keg of Demon Rhum to the sea and vowed to be done with it. He prayed to the Green Apple Jade Buddha for one last reprise. Please Buddha, let her see me as I am now. Let her love me as she once did. When we could not take our eyes or hands off the other. I stared into her eyes looking for my own soul night after night. She read books of inspiration and metaphysics in our tiny bed and I read the Latin Poets, Neruda, Lorca, Octavio Paz, Marquez and we had the life of the rich although poor. We would take turns with the grinding of the fresh coffee beans and the other would stay in bed warm and naked until the other returned with the brew. I always sipped hers to make sure it was perfect. I knew how she like it. I remember every thing we did, the Tango late at night with no music and no one watching, the kissing until our lips were sore. The staring at each other until our eyes bled rubies. I remember most our hearts beating together so fast as one as we made love to each other as if it was our last time. It was time now. I layed down to die. My breath was leaving my body and in the Tropics I was frigid. Suddenly after it seemed like 2 decades she found me and pressed her lips on mine and blew her sweet breath into my lungs and then I knew she was as much a part of me as the very air I breathe. Written by Miguel for the Jade one
48 Comments
Domenico Doleatto 07 May 2008
I like very much your style! This picture is the beautiful of yours... love the water reflection! Good! DomenicoAnonymous Guest 22 Sep 2007
I bow to you and I am grateful that I am able to bring some refreshment and sweetness to you. It is but little from what I have gained from your many incredible gifts.....aoAnonymous Guest 22 Sep 2007
This is one of my *Very Favorite* works of yours I have seen but I do not know what "joss" means in how you are using it. Is it something other than incense? Also-that part about "his head, hard like a stone, left with words unspoken". It made me laugh. It could make me sad because so many of us have done that but I did I get a kick out of that description. Stubbornness carries a very high price. I love the ending where they are together at last, breathing love together, being as one. Gives hope to those of us with tender hearts. Thank you for the beautiful colors, artwork, spellbound words, magic and beauty that this soul-and others-behold from you. Wishing you well-and more... from your invisible friend..... aoAnonymous Guest 19 Feb 2007
I like everything about this piece. The contrast - yellow / violet. It's something I'd like, indeed.Anonymous Guest 19 Feb 2007
I like everything about this piece. The contrast - yellow / violet. It's something I'd like, indeed.Bernard Capelle 09 Jan 2007
Wonderful artwork.Julie Mayser 08 Jan 2007
Beautiful artwork, great colors and contrasts. Text is full of evocative imagery as well!Dene Patton 07 Jan 2007
"Wow!"Susie Rankhorn 04 Jan 2007
So beautiful!William Boyer 31 Dec 2006
nice job, have a happy new year.Marina Taliera 28 Dec 2006
Amazing i realaly like that picture ..great job Michael ... Happy Holidays to you and your family too... MArinaJohn Enright 27 Dec 2006
the photo and words evoke so much imagery and stir the imagination. Your writing is quite remarkable. I am expecting that you have some books published?Carla Klosowski 27 Dec 2006
This is breathtaking Miguel!! Beautiful image and stunning words!Joanna Jungjohann 27 Dec 2006
Miguel, perfect!JoAnna Bova 22 Dec 2006
Wow....the vibrant colors and contrasts...i envy anyone who can do anything with colorHeidi Olson 21 Dec 2006
Beautiful work Miguel....Both the image and the story. Solstice Blessings, and Happy Holidays.Marilyn Comparetto 20 Dec 2006
Beautiful composition and beautiful story.................Tom and Susan Repasky 19 Dec 2006
This is absolutely awesome Miguel!! The colors are vibrant and bold! Very well done!!!Bev Chudey 19 Dec 2006
Beautifully don and said Michael!Anneke Hut 17 Dec 2006
What a wonderful story you have written to this picture! Thank you Michael, it brightened my day.Natalie G 13 Dec 2006
Wow! Love the combination of colors here! Wonderful work, Michael!!Patty Day 12 Dec 2006
Beautifully done!!!!Jean M. Laffitau 10 Dec 2006
Awesome work Michael!!Lynn De Serres 05 Dec 2006
Absolutely splendid.Armando Salas 02 Dec 2006
Admiro mucho tus experimentos digitales, Miguel. Buen trabajo!Mary Ashton 02 Dec 2006
Beautiful Michael, wonderful text. MaryRenata Cavanaugh 01 Dec 2006
Beautifully done Michaelmonique cooper 30 Nov 2006
wow!!.. I really like this!!!.. such details and color.. wow .. just wow!!Marion Bubak 30 Nov 2006
Love your story and a captivating boat.epsylon lyrae 28 Nov 2006
So very nice, great colors! :)Leo Da 28 Nov 2006
Very interesting and cool image, Michael!Lauren Munger 22 Nov 2006
Miguel, you are such a wonderful storyteller. You know the heart of the clan is forever remembered through the spoken word. The image is immense, as well.Tabitha Borges 22 Nov 2006
neat so surreal.Habeeb Hassan 21 Nov 2006
Beautiful digital image. Well deserves appreciation.bianca 21 Nov 2006
oh wow look at these colours...love it michael....HAPPY THANKSGIVING to you and yoursSara Deutsch 20 Nov 2006
Stunning work, Michael! I hope you are putting together an illuminated book of all Miguel's adventures..Olga van Dijk 19 Nov 2006
Great title, great text and great picture, michael!! love it!Anonymous Guest 18 Nov 2006
I am still as much a part of you as the very air you breathe.Loredana 18 Nov 2006
THIS IS AMAZING WORK MY FRIEND THE COLORS ARE SUPERB EXCELLENT MICHAELCarrie Ann Watson 17 Nov 2006
Excellent work, Michael! :) The water is just beautiful!Nira Dabush 17 Nov 2006
Another fantastic artwork...great textures and gorgeous colours..Very creative story...and,i know some people believe that the Jade brings a GOOD LUCK...Are you one of those..do you have a Jade ?...Anonymous Guest 17 Nov 2006
Lovely shot,Michael.wonderful story.cynthia berridge 17 Nov 2006
wonderful story and art workNelly van Nieuwenhuijzen 17 Nov 2006
marvellous story Michael and brilliant work! the colors are fabulous and so are the reflections!!Chas Sinklier 17 Nov 2006
I was worried for Miguel there for awhile Michael... but inside I was hoping that I might have the princess for myself alone - for though I do take the rum - one glass only in the evening - I knew that I could heal her heart for I have loved her since she was but a girl... I like the water in the boat that's very cool looking -:0)Lucia Stewart 17 Nov 2006
Beautiful story amd a fabulous image!thea walstra 17 Nov 2006
A very beautiful story goes along with this beautiful work MichaelTerry Harris 17 Nov 2006
I love the story as much as the painting! I have missed your storytelling adventures. Glad to read some more. This painting is lovely with the colors and the water reflections!