Gail Caduff-Nash 20 Jun 2012

Extraordinary. Great use of black/white/grays. I can't tell if things are being built or falling apart but it's a strong image. I do feel a sense of something about to enter.

Are you living in Poland at this time? Poland's had to do a lot of rebuilding the past 50 years or so.

Diamonike Le June 23 Jun 2012

I TOTALLY AGREE WITH GAIL, IT SAYS A LOT

Lucien van Oosten 27 Jun 2012

lots of interesting shapes. i do think that the large white are needs something to reduce it a focal point also, it looks like a blank screen, a dot or small square in the middle would break it up nicely. I am thinking there needs to be a better tonal balance with the composition. like the idea but to me it is lacking balance. i hope this is what you are looking for. take care, cheers!!! Lucien

Gwenlyn Norton 21 Dec 2013

I agree with Lucien. It doesn't hold my interest long enough. It's too evenly divided between upper and lower images. Maybe 'stark' is the word.

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