wow, you did this with colored pencil? thats awesome. the lines are so smoothe, nothing blends over. you didnt get that chalky feel that mostlly comes from colored pencil. bery good, crisp lines. mind sharing a secret on how you do that?
Your CP work is excellent Trisa! Your composition , though - if you allow - could use a bit more expression - will say:
The digital work in this case is a bit too enforced!
Suggestion:
You put the figure of the "lady" more to foreground, get back "Elz". probabely make a bit more to the left.
Trisa this is constructive critism and by no chance destructive - you are indeed very talented!
Your friend Peter
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stephen smith 26 Jul 2005
wow, you did this with colored pencil? thats awesome. the lines are so smoothe, nothing blends over. you didnt get that chalky feel that mostlly comes from colored pencil. bery good, crisp lines. mind sharing a secret on how you do that?Renata Cavanaugh 18 Jul 2005
BeautifulPeter Kripgans 11 Jul 2005
Your CP work is excellent Trisa! Your composition , though - if you allow - could use a bit more expression - will say: The digital work in this case is a bit too enforced! Suggestion: You put the figure of the "lady" more to foreground, get back "Elz". probabely make a bit more to the left. Trisa this is constructive critism and by no chance destructive - you are indeed very talented! Your friend Peter