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Whenever you should have a heartache.
My story is too much in life.
Think about these words I’m writing:
“Your thoughts are needed to survive”
No one takes themselves the notice
to things in other minds do live
Before you showed your pretty inside,
you’re left behind… with that “Judas kiss”
We all do have our special thinking
and all “shut up” in other ways,
but If you didn’t say what is living,
they leave their thoughts inside your brain.
There they stay and they will whisper
Every day your mouth is zipped.
Till that day you will give the answer:
“Read my feelings from my lips”
Aqua1955
13 Comments
Michael Durst 20 Jul 2011
Beautifully done! What a great expression!inna khorosheva 11 Jun 2010
very impressivepusy 11 Jun 2010
BeautifulOlga van Dijk 10 Jun 2010
B E A U T I F U L , your imaginary beauty AND your poetry my friend. Echt heel mooi Ben! Groetjes, OlgaCalvin McFarlane 10 Jun 2010
most excellent image and poetry...thank youMaria Anna Machado 10 Jun 2010
beautiful work...Ai Shan 10 Jun 2010
Beautiful work and lovely girl!Joan Wulff 10 Jun 2010
Great image and poetry!Sandra McClure 10 Jun 2010
BEautiful work and poetry........Sharon Gonzalez 10 Jun 2010
BEAUTIFUL IMAGE! A SADNESS IN HER EYES. AND THE POEM, POWERFUL. BRAVO, BEN.ruth sears 10 Jun 2010
THIS IS AMAZING,SUCH A BEAUTIFUL IMAGE AND FINE WORDS.jerry carlin 10 Jun 2010
Wow Ben! What was the Beatles song? "I'm looking through you! what do I see?" So pretty but maybe nothing there!James Lanigan-Thompson 10 Jun 2010
Splendid Speechless ! You touched my heart strings stranger - thank you.