I have had a look at the 4 images so far. You give yourself a challenge using bright sunlight in your shots because this gives a high contrast with the dark clothes and intended mood. Maybe you intended that but to me it doesn't quite work. I like the slightly edgy angles but you could go further. Avoid the sunlight as much as possible and make the images darker to help convey mood. I look forward to more postings
Artist Reply: i agree indeed, i do not have enough money for a studio, i do not have enough money for lighting at the moment otherwise i would do more inside shooting. However i do agree with you here, the sunlight does downout some of the most interesting parts of the pictures, to be honest in most it is intended, in some it is not though so i will avoid it if needed, thanks for the comment Phil, much appriciated
Composition, Lighting appropriate to theme, make-up, wardrobe, focal length distortion, texture, angle of photo, and model casting... ALL DONE VERY WELL. Nice Job. I'm impressed. Nick Nikon.
PS.Normally I would say don't cut an arm off like that, but it still seems to work here.
Artist Reply: Thanks for the comment, i feel this is not the best of the four, i like the last one most, but this is your view and i am very happy you have given me your insight into my picture here. I feel your right about the arm, maybe i should of put it into the picture, but i am still glad you like the concept.
From Sam xx
Artist Reply: love you very much too *laughs*
Thank you so much for your comment, i really enjoyed reading it, i feel this pic is a very interesting one indeed, glad you have figured that out about it. :)
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Annie Baxter 19 Oct 2009
LOVE IT, JUST LOVE YOUR WORK....cramer 09 Mar 2009
cool picruth sears 04 Mar 2009
I used to dress like this,love this shot.Phil Armitage 03 Mar 2009
I have had a look at the 4 images so far. You give yourself a challenge using bright sunlight in your shots because this gives a high contrast with the dark clothes and intended mood. Maybe you intended that but to me it doesn't quite work. I like the slightly edgy angles but you could go further. Avoid the sunlight as much as possible and make the images darker to help convey mood. I look forward to more postingspatrick hodson 01 Mar 2009
nice work,well done.oliver davis 28 Feb 2009
i think your work looks amazing keep them comingAnonymous Guest 27 Feb 2009
Composition, Lighting appropriate to theme, make-up, wardrobe, focal length distortion, texture, angle of photo, and model casting... ALL DONE VERY WELL. Nice Job. I'm impressed. Nick Nikon. PS.Normally I would say don't cut an arm off like that, but it still seems to work here.David Mask 26 Feb 2009
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