I agree with therese on the cleanup, though I would aslo sugest that you work on your characters anatomy. Otherwise, I think you have the talent, it just needs some polishing^^
You have a fun character here and she seems well proportioned. My suggestions to really boost the success of this picture would be to clean up your line art really well and to resubmit on a white sheet that isn't wrinkled.
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Anonymous Guest 10 Oct 2007
so cute! i love her!Jerry 09 Oct 2007
Lovely impression!A penn 09 Oct 2007
Wow! You are really improving! Great work! I love the outfit!MillyMolly Adams 09 Oct 2007
Wow...that piece of paper could have been accidently wrinkled Therese. And maybe she doesnt really want to take your advice...just a thought...Desaree Bradshaw 08 Oct 2007
I agree with therese on the cleanup, though I would aslo sugest that you work on your characters anatomy. Otherwise, I think you have the talent, it just needs some polishing^^bianca 08 Oct 2007
I IKE it very much...beautiful work..Therese Davis 08 Oct 2007
You have a fun character here and she seems well proportioned. My suggestions to really boost the success of this picture would be to clean up your line art really well and to resubmit on a white sheet that isn't wrinkled.