Lucia Stewart 14 Dec 2005

I like this image very much and find the title completely fasinating.

Anonymous Guest 08 Dec 2005

Very interesting idea. i like how those people are " photo-shaped-faded-out-ed" Its really interesting. I think that in order to improve this would be to add just a slight shadow under you because it doesn't quite look like you're connecting with the sidewalk. If you look at the short lady behind you you can see just a slight shadow under her and so I think that you should do something like that. and also if you're going to have the really dramatic color chages of those two people on the side, I think that you should make the whole picture have a slight sur-realism as a whole. that way the two people on the side won't look so misfit.

tyson gerber 06 Dec 2005

Aaron I remember this picture shown in class! I personally like it better the other way when the people were in color! I like how the emphasis is focused on you! But I would like to have my eye first be focused on you and then have my eye to follow around the picture and find different things! Maybe somone picking his nose or the lady behind you supper small. But I like the photo! I can tell that you have put a lot of effort into it but I would like to have my eye captured on other things in the picture! The reason I didn't like the change is because I can't tell that the lady to the left is shocked and pointing at you! That was my favorite part! Now I can't even that she has a hand! It is hard to see! But other than that I think you did a good job! Hey I am also taking this class at Salt Lake Community College and I am in the other class! Hope that this critic will help you! Tyson Gerber

Jean M. Laffitau 06 Dec 2005

Very good work and interesting composition Aaron!!