oh how cute!! i really like it! i love the way you drew it, especially how you dont usually see a house like that any more, i dont know! lol good job thou! its adorable.
I like the feel of the piece, but the perspective changes between rooms a bit dramatically. Also, your colors are beautiful, but a little dark--maybe too close in tone. If the main story revolves around the little girl, give her some more obvious contrast.
Artist Reply: Thank you for your comments, Shannon. When I upgrade my image from "Dummy Book" illustrations to final, I will definitely use your suggestions...
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Angie Waszkiewicz 12 Jan 2006
Very detailed and lovely colors! I like the style of it :)Christine brand 11 Jan 2006
I love the tender innocent look and style of this...AAAhhhh! if only the good old ways could hang on a little longer...Excellent colors too.Kathy Izquierdo 03 Oct 2005
oh how cute!! i really like it! i love the way you drew it, especially how you dont usually see a house like that any more, i dont know! lol good job thou! its adorable.Shannon Reinbold-Gee 18 Aug 2005
I like the feel of the piece, but the perspective changes between rooms a bit dramatically. Also, your colors are beautiful, but a little dark--maybe too close in tone. If the main story revolves around the little girl, give her some more obvious contrast.Diana Hume 16 Aug 2005
This is a great illustration, Susan. It seems to pop off the page! I like how the mom extends out of the border on the left side of the picture.