oh how cute!! i really like it! i love the way you drew it, especially how you dont usually see a house like that any more, i dont know! lol good job thou! its adorable.
I like the feel of the piece, but the perspective changes between rooms a bit dramatically. Also, your colors are beautiful, but a little dark--maybe too close in tone. If the main story revolves around the little girl, give her some more obvious contrast.
Artist Reply: Thank you for your comments, Shannon. When I upgrade my image from "Dummy Book" illustrations to final, I will definitely use your suggestions...
Artist Reply: Thank you Emily..the book moves from past to present, and that was (hopefully) my intent..your seeing memories makes me feel like I got it right.
9 Comments
Angie Waszkiewicz 12 Jan 2006
Very detailed and lovely colors! I like the style of it :)Christine brand 11 Jan 2006
I love the tender innocent look and style of this...AAAhhhh! if only the good old ways could hang on a little longer...Excellent colors too.Kathy Izquierdo 03 Oct 2005
oh how cute!! i really like it! i love the way you drew it, especially how you dont usually see a house like that any more, i dont know! lol good job thou! its adorable.Shannon Reinbold-Gee 18 Aug 2005
I like the feel of the piece, but the perspective changes between rooms a bit dramatically. Also, your colors are beautiful, but a little dark--maybe too close in tone. If the main story revolves around the little girl, give her some more obvious contrast.Diana Hume 16 Aug 2005
This is a great illustration, Susan. It seems to pop off the page! I like how the mom extends out of the border on the left side of the picture.Femi Johnson 15 Aug 2005
Very Very good SusanEmily Reed 15 Aug 2005
This really captures memories.georgia brown 15 Aug 2005
Wonderful illustration work Susan!thea walstra 15 Aug 2005
Very lovely and good work