Too busy. The Lettering in the actual logo is weak and the subtitle too bold for accompaniment.... Mel, the guidelines for the text on the bottom portion is off and the font seems too bold... the business card stamped right dead center with the exact angle as the top semi invisible version.. is bothersome.* Uhhh... how's that for constructive criticism? I am not a judge, especially for you Ms. Rinaldi... I just think you are so much better. (it could be that Iv'e been paintiong a mural ALL day also) Good night. H
Artist Reply: thank you for feed back, insight, yes, I agree the lite green logo gets lost, I will rethink its color (maybe by change it to dark brown, burnt orange, it will have more punch?)...its all good....:)
Nice layout. I think that one version of the pears would be better because it is a strong part of the design. Instead I would incorporate the card within the design instead of placing on top. In fact I would use the pear image to compliment the card. Nice restaurant. Looks very inviting.
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Hector Rios - Arternatives 19 Jul 2007
Too busy. The Lettering in the actual logo is weak and the subtitle too bold for accompaniment.... Mel, the guidelines for the text on the bottom portion is off and the font seems too bold... the business card stamped right dead center with the exact angle as the top semi invisible version.. is bothersome.* Uhhh... how's that for constructive criticism? I am not a judge, especially for you Ms. Rinaldi... I just think you are so much better. (it could be that Iv'e been paintiong a mural ALL day also) Good night. Hlerat andree 18 Apr 2005
Nice layout. I think that one version of the pears would be better because it is a strong part of the design. Instead I would incorporate the card within the design instead of placing on top. In fact I would use the pear image to compliment the card. Nice restaurant. Looks very inviting.