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18 January, 2005

Adelle Jean
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Does This Work?

I put my family off to the side to show the Shabbat candles burning where they would normally burn (Not on the side fo the table if I put the people in the center). Plus I wanted to she the first three stars that offically establish the Sabbath has arrived. I know I need to dfix the dogs teeth and get some pencil marks off. Mainly I want to know how people feel about the family offset to the side and any suggestions as to how to make it better.

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Juan Gomez 18 Jan 2005

Adelle not easy to critque because you have an established way of painting which is unique to you..I like your paintings been quitely watching for months..It's excellent how you apply layers and clearly convey the message sent by each painting..only advice paint more that's all.

rosemary gioielli 18 Jan 2005

I really like this Adelle. I think you're asking if the composition is balanced. It seems a little heavier in the corner where the family is positioned. Maybe cropping off the right side a bit?

Mike Sankey 19 Jan 2005

Hullo there adelle, good to see some more work of yours, its great to see you back painting - and excellent comeback piece.

Hope you are well!

Hinsel Scott 19 Jan 2005

good work adelle! such a nice sense of togetherness! the dogs teeth don't look bad - he doesn't have a collar though!*smile*

the only thing i might say to change might be to put a little space between your night sky and the table with the color of the wall so it makes it easier for people to get a sense of looking outside. other than that just keep creating!!