14 February, 2005

Anthro Critique

Hey, this is just a picture of an original character in a manga (comic book) I'm writing. This was mainly an experimental piece I was working on, and was hoping for some tips. Preferably from fellow anime/ manga/cartoonists because not everyone has a respect for cartooning and do not understand it. I would love a professional opinion because I would like to become an animator myself one say.

Harsh critique welcome. Thank you.

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Herb Roe 14 Feb 2005

Looks good to me, but then I don't really know manga.

Hinsel Scott 14 Feb 2005

hey nice work! big manga fan here btw.

only thing i might say is that the light on the legs seems just a tad too bright to me. other than that nicely done, good character design and very dreamy sort of cosmic colors!

Jamie Corcoran 15 Feb 2005

Thank you very much for your complement, Herb. And thank you for your imput Hinsel. I'll try to tweak the legs the best I can. Your criticism really means a lot to me.

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