Hinsel Scott 19 Feb 2005

a little too much rouge but i wouldnt kick her out of bed for eating crackers! hehe!

seriously tho, this is pretty hot jenny! main thing i might do is darken the area under her so she looks more "seated" in the image.

keep creating!!

Steph Salt 20 Feb 2005

Wonderful jenny but I agree with Hinsel on some deepening of the background to make her more a part of it. :)

Emma Anton 20 Feb 2005

Very sexy!!! I actually like it as it is... It would make a good poster (guys??)

rosemary gioielli 20 Feb 2005

very pretty Jenny. I agree she needs to connect with the background more.

Herb Roe 20 Feb 2005

Maybe a little more definition to the background, and some blues and greens in the shadows on her. The color difference(she's all reds and warms, background's all cools)is making her separate.

cramer 20 Feb 2005

nice work...shadow would definatly pull it off

Jenny Gulseren 20 Feb 2005

Thank you all for the great tips and suggestions. You know I look at an image time and time again to figure out what's missing and can't think of anything, but then I hear your comments, and you see what I can't see. Your comments are important for my artistic development and improvement. Hope your weekend is going great.... I now know I need to focus more on shadows and making the object more part of the background. Cheers. :-) Until next time.

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