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08 February, 2010

Memories

You Cut At Me Like A Jagged Rusty Blade, but I Let You Because I Like What You Gave Me. At Time I Sit With You With Such Joy And Without Notice You Leave. Will You Return And Give Me More? Or Will I Finally Let You GO? WE BOTH KNOW THE ANSWER TO THIS QUESTION.

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Dee 10 Feb 2010

I suppose you love to much, despite the pain, to let go. Sometimes a bond cannot be broken.

Tak-Sek Chan 27 Sep 2011

A common error happens here at Member Poetry, when all your lines are joining together. They would be hard to read.

To present your excellent poem in perhaps four or several lines per paragraph, you must put an extra empty line to separate all your lines.

Please see the format in my "Love Letter(s)...", "A Haiku..." and "My Blessings to You All".

Yours truly, Tak-Sek Chan

Tak-Sek Chan 27 Sep 2011

A common error happens here at Member Poetry, when all your lines are joining together. They would be hard to read.

To present your excellent poem in perhaps four or several lines per paragraph, you must put an extra empty line to separate any two of your lines.

Please see the format in my "Love Letter(s)...", "A Haiku..." and "My Blessings to You All".

Yours truly, Tak-Sek Chan

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