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14 January, 2005
  • Dawn Landrum

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It seems to me that you are doing well. Love the vehicles!

I always love to see new mixed with old and decay. haha

The only thing I may have done differently is that I may have eliminated more of the street in the front. Or if you wanted the span between the cars and the onlooker, then I would have erased the white lines to avoid distraction. The banner that is falling is also a distraction and can be removed in photoshop. Is there a way to bring the cars forward so the yellow left car doesn't look so close to the stairs? Then you could have angled it a bit so that the cars are "right there" and the building is all you see behind it as a backround without the alley on each side.

Keep in mind that all suggestions are towards a final art masterpeice that I would have created. All artists and photographers see things in different perspectives. This advice is from my opinion and in no way deminishes what you have already done.

There isn't anything wrong with this that I can see. You have a good eye! Keep it up!

13 January, 2005
  • Ivy Moses
  • 13 Jan 2005
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Original Post: New Photographer, please critique

I joined a couple of weeks ago, please let me know i am shooting . . .