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Page two

Page two of my comic!!! this is where the real drama begins... it'a quite obvious this is the unfinished product... pretty much still trying to sort out what goes where >_< getting to it tho... check out the character pics while this gets worked on

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Anonymous Guest 28 Jan 2004

0-0 pwitty...

Anonymous Guest 28 Jan 2004

actually the smudges come from it being on the reverse side of page 1... i used plain photocopy paper, so the scanner picked up a bit of the other side... still, it's just a sketch yet!!!

Steph Salt 27 Jan 2004

I like it Daniel, it has the feel of some old 70's comics, I'm not talking of childrens comics either. :) It's a bit smudged though. I sugest tracing the best of this and transfering it to a clean sheet. Some deliberates smudging would look good but not these remnants from previous drawing you've erased. I think the eye might look better nearer the bottom centre of the page as well, instead of being of to the side like that.