Page two of my comic!!! this is where the real drama begins... it'a quite obvious this is the unfinished product... pretty much still trying to sort out what goes where >_< getting to it tho... check out the character pics while this gets worked on
actually the smudges come from it being on the reverse side of page 1... i used plain photocopy paper, so the scanner picked up a bit of the other side... still, it's just a sketch yet!!!
I like it Daniel, it has the feel of some old 70's comics, I'm not talking of childrens comics either. :) It's a bit smudged though. I sugest tracing the best of this and transfering it to a clean sheet. Some deliberates smudging would look good but not these remnants from previous drawing you've erased. I think the eye might look better nearer the bottom centre of the page as well, instead of being of to the side like that.
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Anonymous Guest 28 Jan 2004
0-0 pwitty...Anonymous Guest 28 Jan 2004
actually the smudges come from it being on the reverse side of page 1... i used plain photocopy paper, so the scanner picked up a bit of the other side... still, it's just a sketch yet!!!Steph Salt 27 Jan 2004
I like it Daniel, it has the feel of some old 70's comics, I'm not talking of childrens comics either. :) It's a bit smudged though. I sugest tracing the best of this and transfering it to a clean sheet. Some deliberates smudging would look good but not these remnants from previous drawing you've erased. I think the eye might look better nearer the bottom centre of the page as well, instead of being of to the side like that.