love the composition and rendering of the painting. Two things bother me. One is the difficulty with the perspective where the dress meets the grass. Seems like maybe evidence of feet or shoes is needed. Also the dark veritical line under the nose distracts me because I seem to find that and the highlites of the portion on each side of it. I keep seeing a cat or similar animals upper lip. I may be way off base but sure you want all critiques. Again I like your work. Good Luck.
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Anonymous Guest 14 Jan 2007
Reminds me of my granddaughter.Peter Kripgans 01 Sep 2004
very fine CP, Laura!Anonymous Guest 24 Feb 2004
love the composition and rendering of the painting. Two things bother me. One is the difficulty with the perspective where the dress meets the grass. Seems like maybe evidence of feet or shoes is needed. Also the dark veritical line under the nose distracts me because I seem to find that and the highlites of the portion on each side of it. I keep seeing a cat or similar animals upper lip. I may be way off base but sure you want all critiques. Again I like your work. Good Luck.Pat Merewether 18 Jan 2004
I just love this! Her expression seems to say "I'm behaving, but have plans!" So sweet and natural!