Anonymous Guest 30 Mar 2004

i like it because it is more than i can do. i will only draw heads because i can'tr draw hands or feet. i dont care about the lines i do that too i dont meen to but we all cant be a professional now can we.

Lindsey Vegh 20 Feb 2004

I personaly like it and the coloring. The lineart seems alittle sloppy, but, its not terrible. I've seen much much worse. I like the hair alot. And the pose is good.

Anonymous Guest 19 Feb 2004

Anonymous - I doubt you'll see this, but thanks for the feedback. I agree with you wholeheartedly, this does suck. The lineart is indeed sloppy and yes, I should have spent more time cleaning it up. As for the coloring, I agree, cell-shading would have been the ideal way to color it. However, I don't have much experience with that style, so it wasn't really an option. The coloring is quite bad, but seeing as this was created back in May of 2003, I feel I've improved greatly with coloring. Thanks again for the feedback/critique. I can't often find anyone who will honestly critique my art.

Anonymous Guest 19 Feb 2004

Oops. Actual* not "actualy".

Anonymous Guest 19 Feb 2004

Oh dear, this sucks. Learn to use those tools in photoshop or whatever program you use. Cell-style shading woulda been MUCH better for this pic. Making all the higlights and shadows blurry is very difficult to pull off and you really need talent to do it correctly. Also I would seriously consider cleaning up your line-art. There is nothing less professional than jagged, sloppy thick black lines wiggling all over the picture. It detracts from the actualy coloring (which in this case may not be such a bad thing).