First of all I don't know how old you are so it's hard to know if my feedback will make any sense to you, but here it is: I like the composition , but the execution needs some developement . Work on understanding the play between light and shadow ( darkest darks, lightest lights, mid-tones and highlights ). After understanding light and shadow the next step is learning to get your images more refined. You want to clearly separate background and foreground, the idea is to create depth. I see the potential. Keep at it. keep painting. I hope my comments will help you develope your work, consider it productive criticism. Keep at it !
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Steven Burnette 06 Apr 2005
First of all I don't know how old you are so it's hard to know if my feedback will make any sense to you, but here it is: I like the composition , but the execution needs some developement . Work on understanding the play between light and shadow ( darkest darks, lightest lights, mid-tones and highlights ). After understanding light and shadow the next step is learning to get your images more refined. You want to clearly separate background and foreground, the idea is to create depth. I see the potential. Keep at it. keep painting. I hope my comments will help you develope your work, consider it productive criticism. Keep at it !whitney goin 03 Apr 2005
suttle but nice