Spacing needs some changes. I know that it is the laft part of an open menu... I like the layout and watermaked superimposed rounded logos..... as well as the use of white dot indicators.... but the effects of the freehand writing (especially the bottom one) just doesn't quite overcome the compositional crowdedness.
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Nancy Costley 02 Mar 2008
very professional looking thoughHector Rios - Arternatives 29 Feb 2008
Spacing needs some changes. I know that it is the laft part of an open menu... I like the layout and watermaked superimposed rounded logos..... as well as the use of white dot indicators.... but the effects of the freehand writing (especially the bottom one) just doesn't quite overcome the compositional crowdedness.