Gayle Taylor 30 Oct 2004

Great work, especially the eyes.

Charles Jones 30 Oct 2004

the hands are great and I know that they are very hard to do but I wish there were some shadow and texture somwhere in it besides the clothes and I need some more visual clues to understand why the chin and mouth are not lined up to each other, somehow it looks as if the waist is too wide, there is a lot of bare midriff but no suggestion at all of any muscles or bones beneath her skin

Dawn Landrum 30 Oct 2004

The clothes, the hands the belly...all wonderful. Even the face is great, but the proportion of the head and where it is placed and it's size compared to the rest is off a tad. Stand back and look and you'll see what I mean. You ARE very gifted and I think you will go far after you refine a few techniques! Keep on drawing. I am excited to see what you do next!