Great Oil, very good for you first painting. I didn't see your comments because I didn't receve nothing for a month from AW. I was one of them, finally it is fixed.
the sky is too saturated at the bottom, it should almost blend with the clouds there, the rocks need a little fine splatter effect for texture, and let a little bit of sky though your larger folige mass and a little shadow in the bottom portion of the smaller one, the water looks green on my screen, is it that color?
Those look alot like Pat's trees....all in all not too crappy... shadows look good and the rocks look good too... maybe next time add more shadows in the rocks that helps to make them more 3 dimensional...but over all a good job...you should be proud of that
Yay Mz Karen.... Welcome to AW (formaly) and i must say its so nice and refreshing to see a first compleyed painting with so much style and smiles... please do more.. you have some great areas in the work and shadow work well done... and have fun! : )
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Martha Miller 18 Oct 2005
This is your best one yet.i do like this.the tree almost looks alive.your sky is very nice. i think this is a great painting.David Paul 21 Jul 2005
for a FIRST you are well on your way. Nicely doneRusty Woodward-Gladdish 24 Mar 2005
This is very good and shows that you have talent and orginality. Just keep painting and develop your style. It's lovely!Ed Fairburn 30 Nov 2004
First pic? Yep, impressive - I bet you're proud, you should be : )George Severny 29 Nov 2004
very nice oilRenata Cavanaugh 28 Nov 2004
Excellent first painting. Pretty impressiveLucas Seven 27 Nov 2004
...I guess we all have a lighthouse in our portfolios...Patricia Laffrenere 22 Nov 2004
love lighthouses and the way you did the clouds, wish I could do that!Peter Rutilquarz 20 Nov 2004
Great Oil, very good for you first painting. I didn't see your comments because I didn't receve nothing for a month from AW. I was one of them, finally it is fixed.Charles Jones 12 Nov 2004
the sky is too saturated at the bottom, it should almost blend with the clouds there, the rocks need a little fine splatter effect for texture, and let a little bit of sky though your larger folige mass and a little shadow in the bottom portion of the smaller one, the water looks green on my screen, is it that color?Clare Rowley-Greene 01 Nov 2004
Nice work... I love the way you got the water to shimmer... You are well on your way to many other wnderful pieces i am sure.Pete Miller 21 Oct 2004
Those look alot like Pat's trees....all in all not too crappy... shadows look good and the rocks look good too... maybe next time add more shadows in the rocks that helps to make them more 3 dimensional...but over all a good job...you should be proud of thatsher richardson 20 Oct 2004
Yay Mz Karen.... Welcome to AW (formaly) and i must say its so nice and refreshing to see a first compleyed painting with so much style and smiles... please do more.. you have some great areas in the work and shadow work well done... and have fun! : )Charles Oliver 20 Oct 2004
Love the simplicity of style and muted light tones.