Your line weights are far too even throughout the piece. It's all heavy. The penciled looking DG at the bottom is distracting. Her gadget (left hand) has sloppy details. The weapon FX should be 3 times as large, forshortening on the right arm doesn't support angel of sholder socket, and her breasts are not anatomically correct with respect to the placement/angle of the sternum in her current stance.
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stefano mendoza 03 Jun 2004
more proportionsKathy LaFollett 02 Jun 2004
Your line weights are far too even throughout the piece. It's all heavy. The penciled looking DG at the bottom is distracting. Her gadget (left hand) has sloppy details. The weapon FX should be 3 times as large, forshortening on the right arm doesn't support angel of sholder socket, and her breasts are not anatomically correct with respect to the placement/angle of the sternum in her current stance.Kyle Tompkins 02 Jun 2004
needs work on the contrast. i'm #@&uming that there's a gun of sorts blending in with all that hair...