18 October, 2015

Some honest critique please.

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jim boehmer 23 Oct 2015

..great painting

Tonie Knutz 06 Nov 2015

Hard to say this to you... your composition is off. take a piece of paper and cover the bottom half of your painting. You would notice it looks good. then uncover it.. the river is two large... my only Suggestions give is to remove some of the water adding dry rocks to both sides of the river and darken the water it is also going to have green, red and black shadow reflections from the trees.

Thomas Payne 12 Nov 2015

Thank you for the insight. You are absolutely correct. This painting has sold, so this will be lessons learned on this one.

Thanks, Tonie

Tonie Knutz 30 Nov 2015

That is great... It is not a bad painting love the colors:)

Daniela Isache 22 Mar 2016

A beautiful landscape ...

Daniel Mooney 08 Apr 2016

Very nice but the river feels like it is tilted to the right compared to the horizon. But that could just be me.

Nikita S 08 Aug 2016

Nice looking painting. I like the colors.

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