jim boehmer 01 Aug 2014

pretty good

Crazycatz9 19 Aug 2014

the back ground needs not to be the focus rather blurred, the shirt took me a while but shows texture but not proportion to the body its worn on. and i see allot of sharp edges unless your not going for the photo realistic aspect.

Steven Fischer 24 Aug 2014

yeah you sort have it backwards. to me...in my humble opinion, the little dude's face is blurry and the background is sharp. taking a photography class is very helpful if you haven't already.

Lydia Craven 19 Sep 2014

The only problem that really stands out to me is that the photo seems blurry.

Tonie Knutz 03 Nov 2014

Looks unfinished to me... its as if you put a diagonal line across the painting. the white needs something that will help the viewer know what the back ground is and keep in mind white attracts the eyes first, bright colors second and last thing you see is black. take a step back and look at your painting again. you may see what I am talking about.

Roz Eve 28 Feb 2015

The clear lines, and shapes on the shirt is attracting attention along with the interesting expression on the face. keeping the eyes both the darkest and lightest point and on the third lines create it as the main area of interest and the shirt is a secondary point of interest the third is the sign on his back. This is a success.You could refine with detail the face a little more if you like. Bravo!

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