23 July, 2013

Critique wanted

any help is great always looking to improve

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5 Comments

Gail Caduff-Nash 02 Aug 2013

Good face. And i like the composition & coloring. It's digital? After all the detail work of her body, it seems to need more in the hair - more fine lines.

Seth Stephens 07 Aug 2013

yes this is digital yea having trouble with getting the right amount of hair always too much ot not enough i guess i simplified it to much this time thanks for the critique

Gail Caduff-Nash 23 Aug 2013

Seth, can I suggest www.wetcanvas.com as a better place to interact & learn with other artists? AW has lost a lot of it's appeal esp on the critique page. deviantart is ok but i don't know that there are artist on artist critiques there.

Jimmie Martin 02 Sep 2013

Good work great use of shadows, and shades. A rendering of illustration, or comic book style.

Doug Murray 30 Oct 2013

I like this image. The hair looks great. I think the handle of her sword is too short. That sounds like a stupid comment, but I can picture her cutting off heads with two hands.

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