27 June, 2013

Shawl Dancer

Would like some feedback for this image inspired by dancer walking by during the Aboriginal Day Festivals

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Gail Caduff-Nash 15 Jul 2013

Well done! Maybe suggest the landscape?

Kevin Anderson 13 Oct 2013

Thank you, was thinking of using scanned copies of dancers, ao I can cut and paste, and using random backgrounds, which haven't got around to using yet

Doug Murray 27 Oct 2013

You have shown the subject with an amazing sense of movement; both with her pose and the objects in her hand. What seems a little "still" are the tassels on her sleeves and skirt. You might show more dynamic movement by drawing the tassels with the same dynamic movement of the body.

Kevin Anderson 12 Nov 2013

I'll keep the movement of the dress in mind on the next one as I progress, thanks Doug

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