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17 October, 2012

Keith Armer
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All info helpful ! Blunt , Honest Critiques Welcomed

I've been painting for about 15 years. Mostly I have picked up tricks on my own by trial and error. I try to make my works look real and life-like.

Gary Thomas is the gentleman who is commissioned each year to paint the new enshrinees for the Pro Football Hall of Fame Inductions. His paintings are always next to the players' busts. He gave me a few small tips once, but I've never really had formal art training. I think his work is absolutely incredible.

Your insight, criticism, suggestions ..whatever, are completely welcomed. Please fell free to be as honest and as blunt as you want. My goal is to become a better artist.

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Gail Caduff-Nash 17 Oct 2012

I think it's fine. This one is more balanced and the strength of the player is very clear. I'd still suggest that darker shadows are needed on the face. You're working from a photo, right?, and the player's suit is a shiny material? so the shadows are going to be different than if the material was dull/cottony. I could even see stronger highlights on the helmet and clothes. Make it sparkle.

Gail Caduff-Nash 25 Oct 2012

No football commentators here? Give your critique.

Ted Hammer 05 Nov 2012

Don't be afraid to put some color in the shadows. Yes, on the "make it sparkle" comment. Remmeber, professional football is entertainment... you know, ballet with cleats.

Mary Vargas 10 Nov 2012

I see great potential, if you like or as "suggestion" you can darken the background, other than that Good job it looks very professional and you are great artist! Nice to meet you looking forward to see more of yours.

David Betts 17 Mar 2014

I think you did a great job. You're a natural and continual work on your technique will produce even better results. Keep it up. I think you've found your niche!