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i really dont like digital art hinsel i think its cheap and imitation at its very best. what is this supposed to even BE !? just a bunch of colors your puked onto the sceen!? did you do this blindfolded ??
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thats why i POST i can look at these by myself all i want with no extra effort.
I like the diptych the best...going from softness and darkness to light and geometry, in a story panel fashion...although the circles farthest to the right are a bit stark for me.
I am a cobalt blue freak - love it with a tish of red (hard to combo those without making the eviewer's eye jump). I like the texture on the right side, too.
My eye stops at the broken circle connecting the two panels,because the space between them should represent what is missing, not just adding space between them. Perhaps adjust the partial circle in the left panel so that the eye doesn't stop so abruptly wheree the circle parts don't "match up".
I like it as a whole - just give it the ol' Hinsel tweakage, perhaps.
There, feel better now? :)
The Duo is ok though if I had to pick.
David.
perhaps I need to know more before making a final call ;-)
thanks for commenting david! i know digital don't do it for alot of people and abstract too a difficult genre to connect with alot of times - the two combined well its a double whammy for me really. *smile* thank you for being bold and honest and commenting - i really do appreciate it!
but there is something 'uncomfortable' about the broken circle... it either needs to be wholly in the right panel or more of it in the left... it is something to do with the offset... not sure
hot artwork i like it
how about this one TRIPtych any better ?
BALANCE AND WHOLENESS AND DYNAMIC ELEMENTS...
WONDERFUL HINSEL :)
Only thing troubling my eye is the larger red dot in the fore ground. It wants to move it somewhere else in the compostition.
Partial to the Trip as well. I love the way the image draws my eye beyond the composition. It (at least to me) infers contiuation of flow and movement beyond the boundries of the frame.
thanks wendy - yeah i dig the triptych probably most. i like how my red dot looks like its ALmost hanging over the edge.
thanks for commenting kari! i wanted to give this one a kind of depth to it; from what you've said i seem to have been decently successful. love my red dot tho. heheh!
Seriously though, depth and movement you defintely have going here...good job.
"don't jump!!!!!!"
hehe! that's funny! call the cops we got a jumper!! hehe!
thanks jenny ! i appreciate it!!
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