Gail Caduff-Nash 09 Jul 2012

good simple geometric forms; good practice; good observations; too many light sources (shadows); as the Grand Boss of your artwork, you can pick shadow shapes to use, as long as they make sense. i like the slight glare on the front of the container - the reflection. but i especially like the lack of hard lines throughout.

Patrick Murphy 09 Jul 2012

thanks. My "studio" has 2 light sources, so i draw both shadows it casts. Also i tried to mimic the shadow on the table the best i could.

Gail Caduff-Nash 13 Jul 2012

Don't draw what you see; draw what you WANT to see. ;)

Stephen Donoho 17 Jul 2012

BOTH ARE SO COOL !

elinor shapiro 12 Aug 2012

hey i use those kind of containers to store paints XD. you certainly got the shape good and the reflections. my only sugestion is that for the shadows you can see the pencil marks. try going really lightly to make the shadows and then go over it a couple times to make it darker, that way you cant see the pencil marks quite as much.

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