On this piece I think that you should look more into drawing hands . . . just draw them randomly in different positions to help you get a feel for the way they look and there placement in a piece. Also the chest and or shoulder, its very distracting and the front piece is very unclear of who's it is . . . maybe some more shadowing for the further back figure . . . like you have don't in the inner ear of the forward figure. I do like the shine that this piece has and the faces are done very well. Experiment with your shadows, they add soooo much.
Artist Reply: thankzz i guess u've taken a lot of pain to tell me whats wrong in my painting n i very much appreciate that..i'll surely work on my hands as u said n the shadows as well
Thanks ur comments really mean a lot to me!!!!!!!
3 Comments
John Cappello 21 Jun 2012
AMAZING work !Ann Fawssett-Atkin 09 Jul 2010
Very good colour and designIvy Moses 03 Jul 2010
On this piece I think that you should look more into drawing hands . . . just draw them randomly in different positions to help you get a feel for the way they look and there placement in a piece. Also the chest and or shoulder, its very distracting and the front piece is very unclear of who's it is . . . maybe some more shadowing for the further back figure . . . like you have don't in the inner ear of the forward figure. I do like the shine that this piece has and the faces are done very well. Experiment with your shadows, they add soooo much.