the shading on the top of the lips is too dark- study the original the highlight hits the top of her lip-its a fine white outline- you can soften her lips a bit- otherwise great work
Artist Reply: I think you are the same annonymous guest who gave me the advise on the other drawing and if so, thank you very much for the honest critique, it's the only way I will get any better is with honest critiques, and once again your advise was correct so thank you for that.
Thanks Again,
Chris
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Evelyn Simon 26 Apr 2008
Outstanding job!!alma groskinsky 22 Mar 2008
Very nice work you got her...Anonymous Guest 25 Feb 2008
the shading on the top of the lips is too dark- study the original the highlight hits the top of her lip-its a fine white outline- you can soften her lips a bit- otherwise great workJoanna Jungjohann 23 Feb 2008
very beautiful work, chris!~annette steens 23 Feb 2008
cool done!