This is another interesting compostion that would benefit greatly from some darker ranges of tone...Maybe focusing more on some details too...don't want to pick you apart right away and make you feel uncomfortable...It seems like you have a sensitive eye for meaning and a feel for beauty that is natural...but I sense a bit of uncertainty in your work...You can always erase when using graphite so have no fear. Hope you don't mind my suggestions. Sorry if you feel swooped upon...that was not my intention...Now I feel bad...I just wanted to encourage you to not be so hesitant.
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Thomas Broadfoot 19 Jan 2006
Another excellent pencil work .... well doneJulie Noel 17 Jan 2006
its awesome!Christine brand 16 Jan 2006
This is another interesting compostion that would benefit greatly from some darker ranges of tone...Maybe focusing more on some details too...don't want to pick you apart right away and make you feel uncomfortable...It seems like you have a sensitive eye for meaning and a feel for beauty that is natural...but I sense a bit of uncertainty in your work...You can always erase when using graphite so have no fear. Hope you don't mind my suggestions. Sorry if you feel swooped upon...that was not my intention...Now I feel bad...I just wanted to encourage you to not be so hesitant.