As New Boston smolder in flames Asher's brusied and broken body fell to one knee. Firstborn's bulking shadow crossed Asher's fallen frame, a tear of blood slipped down his cheek. 'You know Asher yer kid put up more of a fight!' His clubed fist grabbed asher's dark hair and pulled him towrad the soot filled sky until his feet were dangling. He drew his weapon to asher's neck. 'Heh! So much for yer mission of vengence!' This is from a loosly based religon comic I came up with.
4 Comments
sher richardson 26 Jun 2005
tealented use of watercolour david! Plus nice composing of a scene and storyline : )georgia brown 25 Jun 2005
Nice writing and painting!stephanie atlee 25 Jun 2005
wonderful story line and nice illistructions...well done.Scott 25 Jun 2005
Nice characters, and use of color.