02 Mar 2003

This is wonderful... such a peaceful and serene image. A couple things immediately caught my eye, however... first, her neck seems to be a bit strained/stiff... it goes against the peaceful feeling, and instead makes the viewer a bit tense. Also, her right wing (our left) comes forward a bit too much it seems. Maybe if you darkened it up in certain spots... like you did so nicely with the other wing... it wouldreally help a lot! Other than those minor distractions, I absolutely love this piece! Very nice work... congratulations!