Overall the idea is really good. I do think that the background, the negative space needs something to enhance the main subject. The lower fog,or dust needs to have more variation in colors and textures. Nice start needs more to make it a complete composition in my way of thinking. Proportions on the figure are good.
Artist Reply: I agree. However its just a stepping stone to visualize my ideas. There are many elements I dont like myself. Thanks for the comments!
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Lucien van Oosten 18 Aug 2012
Overall the idea is really good. I do think that the background, the negative space needs something to enhance the main subject. The lower fog,or dust needs to have more variation in colors and textures. Nice start needs more to make it a complete composition in my way of thinking. Proportions on the figure are good.