Overall the idea is really good. I do think that the background, the negative space needs something to enhance the main subject, as it is the main subjects especially the flower get lost in the background color scheme too much. To me that area need some more depth, darker contrasting colors to the white flowers, like around the vase. what you have is good but it needs a little more pop between negative and positive space to me. vase.
Artist Reply: Dear Lucien.
Many thanks for your detailed comment. I totally agree!
with best wishes,
Olga
4 Comments
Elizabeth Lindberg 28 Aug 2012
This is wonderful work! I especially love the vase. The entire composition is excellent!Joanie Holliday 18 Aug 2012
FANTASTIC AND BEAUTIFUL STILL LIFE OLGA.. YOU DID A WONDERFUL PIECE OF ART WORK. LOVE THE SOFT BLANKETED BACKGROUND... JOANIEEmily Reed 18 Aug 2012
I love how soft it is! Beautiful! beautiful!Lucien van Oosten 18 Aug 2012
Overall the idea is really good. I do think that the background, the negative space needs something to enhance the main subject, as it is the main subjects especially the flower get lost in the background color scheme too much. To me that area need some more depth, darker contrasting colors to the white flowers, like around the vase. what you have is good but it needs a little more pop between negative and positive space to me. vase.