good work with detail and shading but something isn't quite right with the placement of the left eye...maybe too far away from the nose?? Or maybe the nose and mouth are too far to the left...?
I notice that even though everything is almost exquisite...it's all a bit off (on 90% of your gallery pieces too) This one for instance, has a cheekbone that seems to be sticking too far out...the nose is chiseled on the end, she has an adam's apple, there is a tuft of hair whited out on the left side...but everything else is immaculate.
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Steve Wonegeshik 25 Oct 2006
good work with detail and shading but something isn't quite right with the placement of the left eye...maybe too far away from the nose?? Or maybe the nose and mouth are too far to the left...?Melissa Martinez 18 Jul 2005
Nice shading.~Katie~ . 11 Nov 2004
wow awesome work mel, I love everything about it, I love her necklaceApril Smith 15 Jun 2004
I notice that even though everything is almost exquisite...it's all a bit off (on 90% of your gallery pieces too) This one for instance, has a cheekbone that seems to be sticking too far out...the nose is chiseled on the end, she has an adam's apple, there is a tuft of hair whited out on the left side...but everything else is immaculate.Spurgeon Isaac 02 Jun 2004
Nice shading Mel, I also like the hair.eileen martin 01 Jun 2004
good job on the hair