Lupe-Gan Ewert 03 Nov 2003

Wow, the sheets look awesome!! And her hair! So pretty!

Cassie Chamberlain 05 Oct 2003

Errrg this is very difficult to crit! Firstly, yes it is too blurry especially at the bottom. For very difficult things like creases in clothing or drawing in details, avoid trying to blend, blur or hide them, take the challenge and go for it XD You started off very well with the legs under the covers but it needed to be carried through to the bottom of the image. I understand the pillow is especially difficult (I have an image like that not on my portfolio, give me an email if you'd like to see it) you need to think about the effect on the pillow when you place something on it. You've got the basics right but those little creases are too random (I don't blame you at all I know it's hard) The bed they are lying on would also have a few creases in it but again the lines seem a bit random. the bodies are drawn pretty well for a difficult position, the girl's head is in the right place but it would be nice if she had some shading on her body too. The hands are fairly good. Overall it's an excellent effort for a very difficult subject!!