PLEASE HELP!
This is my final project for my painting class that is due next week. I would love feedback and suggestions. I still have 5 days to complete it. Oil on canvas 30in. x 40 in. Thanks for your assitance on this.
wow color!!! They work well together although I'd like to see some white mixed in with those black lines. It seems unfinished to me for some reason. The composition works and the image is over all intriguing,
Ellen , you were worried about the right side , it mirrors the left in the green area with red blobs which works for me , you could add a thin black line against lower right green to complete the arc of black across the canvas and give a continuity and inclusion of the whole picture . Sue
Great Colourful Abstract Work......Feels like there are wonderful meaningful little details throughout.....The little bird with the golden egg is a lovely touch.......Great Work!!!!
suggestions??? hmmm... I appreciate the running of vertical mostly within the patterns laid. Youve created balance by having two rounded objects in the upper and lower portions. the colors are bright and bold-making it eye catching. When i view the work my focal point stays quite long in the center trying to decifer the blue from the organge from the yellow birds... this isnt bad- it just held my attention for awhile to figure it out. overall I would say it presents itself as a project that would bring interest and color to any room it was displayed in. good luck on your final project and let me know how it goes! Best-K
18 Comments
Babis Kiliaris 11 Apr 2006
what a strong colors!!!! this is great!!!Steve Farr 30 Mar 2006
Very interesting and original! Vibrant!!!!!Nira Dabush 29 Dec 2005
Well,Ellen,this is GORGEOUS!!! VERY WELL BALANCED...Great use of colour,I LOVE IT!Manuela Facchin Varalda 13 Dec 2005
Wonderful colors (and title too...), love this composition!Anna Lo Bello 12 Dec 2005
Great composition! I like the colors and the subject!Nayana Glazier 10 Dec 2005
wow color!!! They work well together although I'd like to see some white mixed in with those black lines. It seems unfinished to me for some reason. The composition works and the image is over all intriguing,Aris Stathakis 09 Dec 2005
this is wonderful, love the colors and shapes, beautiful work Ellen!Renee Nemerov 09 Dec 2005
Great colors! Great movement!Loredana 09 Dec 2005
I love it Ellen I think its nicely Blanced with great bold colors and very eye catching , its a very nice Abstraction Ellen ...sue Beecroft 08 Dec 2005
Ellen , you were worried about the right side , it mirrors the left in the green area with red blobs which works for me , you could add a thin black line against lower right green to complete the arc of black across the canvas and give a continuity and inclusion of the whole picture . SueDeborah Martin 08 Dec 2005
Great Colourful Abstract Work......Feels like there are wonderful meaningful little details throughout.....The little bird with the golden egg is a lovely touch.......Great Work!!!!Joke Schotting 08 Dec 2005
Great and beautiful colors,Ellen!!!K L Marsala 08 Dec 2005
suggestions??? hmmm... I appreciate the running of vertical mostly within the patterns laid. Youve created balance by having two rounded objects in the upper and lower portions. the colors are bright and bold-making it eye catching. When i view the work my focal point stays quite long in the center trying to decifer the blue from the organge from the yellow birds... this isnt bad- it just held my attention for awhile to figure it out. overall I would say it presents itself as a project that would bring interest and color to any room it was displayed in. good luck on your final project and let me know how it goes! Best-Kthea walstra 08 Dec 2005
Very nice work EllenAnalua 08 Dec 2005
Magnific work in colors and design Ellen!!!!Emily Reed 08 Dec 2005
Great!Lindy van den Bosch 08 Dec 2005
How tropical! Thanks for all the pretty coloursNelly van Nieuwenhuijzen 08 Dec 2005
THIS IS REALLY SO GORGEOUS AND BEAUTIFUL!! GREAT COLORS AND I LOVE THE DETAILS, THE BIRDS, THE EYES ETC.!!!!EXCELLENT, ELLEN!