This drawing is of my son, Simon reading from the torah at his bar mitzvah. This is my first attempt of drawing and and I would like to make some changes, but it is a midterm project due today, so this is it for now. Any suggestions and feedback on how to improve it would be greatly appreciated.
11 Comments
Lara Falcone 29 Mar 2006
Wonderful work here Ellen!Linda Mason 20 Nov 2005
Good drawing of a very wonderful moment.Loredana 02 Nov 2005
Very beautifully done Ellen :)PMyers 02 Nov 2005
Fantastic pencil work. I love all the different levels of shading you used.Nira Dabush 02 Nov 2005
Hi,Ellen..and wow!!! it is thrilling...Bar- Mitzva......and now,i understand about the hebrew fonts.Ellen..this is truly beautiful,as a begining...i'm proud of you,although,i myself don't do pencils since i was student :-)...this all scene,is exceiting..and i really see,and feel the atmosphere and people...and your son,is handsome :-) CONGRETULATIONS!stephanie atlee 01 Nov 2005
very nice pencil work...love the detailsjoan warburton 01 Nov 2005
Fantastic pencil work! Congratulations to your son and his entrance to manhood. Such a wonderful scene!Emily Reed 01 Nov 2005
Nicely drawn.Analua 01 Nov 2005
This is marvelous Ellen!!!! Magnific work!!!!Nelly van Nieuwenhuijzen 01 Nov 2005
I see LOVE in this pencil, Ellen! BEAUTIFULL!!Joke Schotting 01 Nov 2005
Great pencil-work,Ellen!!