I think the face is very well done (as someone else said, a bit out of proportion, but not by much) and the hair is awesome... the clothes though... they need a lot of work. They are very almost bland. Try sharpening them up a bit, as the actual structure is well done. It is just the shading. Other than that, nice image.
I know I am going to get you mad at me but a well proportioned face can be divided into thirds, from the chin to the nose is one third, from the bottom of the nose to the eyebrows is another third, a it is another third to the hairline. Your face proportions is off, and if not for that this would truly be an impressive and beautiful picture, I love the background, and the pose, and everything is rendered so well
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Linda Scott 09 Jul 2008
Her face is outstanding, as is the city scape!Jim Buckley 27 Nov 2004
superb composition and overall impression. I agree with others about the facial proportions and the clothing. Very powerful image nonthelesscile bailey 14 Nov 2004
wonderful!!!!!!! CileKate Malcolm 08 Nov 2004
I think the face is very well done (as someone else said, a bit out of proportion, but not by much) and the hair is awesome... the clothes though... they need a lot of work. They are very almost bland. Try sharpening them up a bit, as the actual structure is well done. It is just the shading. Other than that, nice image.stan jones 07 Nov 2004
very nice piece of art love the green eyessher richardson 06 Nov 2004
...i feel like i'm looking at a super hero in contemplation.. : ) its a powerful image sarah lynn...tim linville 06 Nov 2004
Well...I think you have a much better grasp on face proportion,than others are willing to give credit!Excellent Jade-works,Sarah-Lynn!Peter Thomas 06 Nov 2004
very nice pieceCharles Jones 06 Nov 2004
I know I am going to get you mad at me but a well proportioned face can be divided into thirds, from the chin to the nose is one third, from the bottom of the nose to the eyebrows is another third, a it is another third to the hairline. Your face proportions is off, and if not for that this would truly be an impressive and beautiful picture, I love the background, and the pose, and everything is rendered so wellSarina Renee 06 Nov 2004
Love the face, hair and background, but the clothing needs a bit of work. Still much better than I can do. Fabulous.