i wrote the following poem just for this bed .. ************************* In the dead of the night On an empty bed I lay still With darkness in vista My cranium begins to fill Thinking about tomorrow I yield to my pitiful sorrow Away the time flies I wonder about the untold lies As I close my eyes I spot the crimson skies My head sinks in the pillows Listening to the wind in the willows As the sun steals away the moon Morning came but a moment too soon As the dreams depart my head I am lying awake in an empty bed ************************** thank you for your time and efforts ... Have a wonderful life:)
22 Comments
Ruth Kauffman 15 Mar 2007
Well...the lovely poetry has answered my one question!! :) You do excellent work, Hassan!!!Alberto D'Assumpcao 07 Oct 2006
Excellent composition, Hassan! Wonderful colours!Jacqueline Bishop 06 Oct 2006
nice work!!!Lucia Stewart 27 Sep 2006
Great poem Hassan, so multi-talented!!Olga van Dijk 26 Sep 2006
Nice text Hassan!! very expressive!Carla Klosowski 24 Sep 2006
So gorgeous...love the prose and the softness of the bed and colors...Thomas Broadfoot 22 Sep 2006
Wonderful workDoris B. Lambling 22 Sep 2006
impressive and touching - especially the poem!!!Analua 21 Sep 2006
Well done a great concep work!!! I love your poetry too!bianca 21 Sep 2006
what a nice way to express....awsome work...Vanessa Rhodes 21 Sep 2006
Very deep poem and a very wonderful description for this image.. very intellectual work.Blue Doll 21 Sep 2006
ohw my gosh... what a very very beautyfull poem... whit a very beautyfull EMPTY BED whit it... I do have one question iff I may.... why don't you put the poem IN you creation??? that looks awesome together!! I hope i dont hurt your feelings now??? Hugs BlueChristine brand 21 Sep 2006
Excellent poem...Excellent poem for this bed...I never thought of a thing like this, very creative HP!!!Izabella Pavlushko 20 Sep 2006
very interesting work, Hassan, very lovely colors, main color gives mystery. Great !!!sharon hendrickson 20 Sep 2006
Lonelieness is only a frame of mind, but all the same , it is there. Great poem and lovely image my friend...!!!~***BRAVO***~!!!Julie Mayser 20 Sep 2006
You have certainly made the poem visualized with this image....Ginger Lovellette 20 Sep 2006
Marvelous work both with the image and the poem, Hassan!thea walstra 20 Sep 2006
Marvellous work Hassanjessica torrant 20 Sep 2006
The darkness in the corner of the picture seems to speak of a lonely or lost feeling - great work, Hassan!Anne Vis 20 Sep 2006
Looks like you need some company here, Hassan! :-) Soulful work!cynthia berridge 20 Sep 2006
you have such a way with words,Nelly van Nieuwenhuijzen 20 Sep 2006
beautiful words in this gorgeous poem, Hassan, and the work is marvellous! It is giving thougts to run and it's caressing the eyes.