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Speechless

Whenever you should have a heartache.
My story is too much in life.
Think about these words I’m writing:
“Your thoughts are needed to survive”

No one takes themselves the notice
to things in other minds do live
Before you showed your pretty inside,
you’re left behind… with that “Judas kiss”

We all do have our special thinking
and all “shut up” in other ways,
but If you didn’t say what is living,
they leave their thoughts inside your brain.

There they stay and they will whisper
Every day your mouth is zipped.
Till that day you will give the answer:
“Read my feelings from my lips”

Aqua1955

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Michael Durst 20 Jul 2011

Beautifully done! What a great expression!

Artist Reply: Thank you very much Michael :)

inna khorosheva 11 Jun 2010

very impressive

Artist Reply: Thank for your lovely comment

pusy 11 Jun 2010

Beautiful

Artist Reply: Dank je wel :)

Olga van Dijk 10 Jun 2010

B E A U T I F U L , your imaginary beauty AND your poetry my friend. Echt heel mooi Ben! Groetjes, Olga

Artist Reply: I'm glad I am one of the members of the double dutch group.. Thank you Olga

Calvin McFarlane 10 Jun 2010

most excellent image and poetry...thank you

Artist Reply: Thanks for your leaving your comment Calvin