compostion is strong in color. BUT --- it's too garish. ie. power red juxtaposed next to equally powerful white cause them to engage in a visual fight that tires the eyes and aggitates the viewer after a short period. choose colors that support one another such as secondary colors or colors that are next to one another on the color wheel. Also, the focal point is centered in the middle of the picture plane. This immoblizes the composition and makes it stagnant and stationary. choose colors that make the eyes dance.