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On your road to..

On your road from small to bigger - You say goodbye to teddy bear - Because you’re growing up these days - And he is not needed for you there - That puppet who knew every teardrop - And understood the things you are - That toy bear with his sparkling eyes - Who never left you for so far - On the road from long to longer - You say goodbye to certain times - In which your never got a lesson - In which you get helpless, sometimes blind - A lot of thoughts are for you changing - A lot of thoughts are there to grow - Red is the color of the world - But not that one, you’ll like to know - Those sofly words are so much harder - And you’re the first time.. all alone - All the roads they look the same - And now... you don’t know where to go - On the road to wise and wiser - There is sometimes an aching pain - Why are there so many questions - They need to go and not remain! - Live.. it is a difficult book - Where sometimes words go up in air - And you’re searching for some warmth - Or just that sparkling sunshine flare - On the road to strong and helpless - You see again your teddy bear - So much words you want to say - But the words... they are not there - Gently you caress it’s cheeck - From that puppet in your room - The one that you once left behind - In that corner with a broom - Suddenly there is that smile - Because a puppet wich does know - That ..simply listening teddy bear - Your little friend.. that did not go - Copyright ~Aqua1955~

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magenta white 29 Aug 2009

Not only do I love the words and this piece... I love the feeling invoked when viewed....

Artist Reply: thanks for your great comment ;-)

Anonymous Guest 06 Jun 2009

Very DEEP Ben. I still have The TEddybear from my childhood, probably because my grandmother saved it. but..... now that she has passed on. That teddybear is a dear memory to me. The young woman really seems to be recalling her memories

Artist Reply: great words, who ever you are

Delfina Mendonça 05 Jun 2009

Excellent rendering

Artist Reply: Thanks

Olga van Dijk 04 Jun 2009

THIS IS AN AMAZING RENDERING....(great text!) -Love and Light, OLGA

Artist Reply: Glad you read the text to it ;-) Thanks for your comment Olga

ruth sears 04 Jun 2009

what a warm and wonderful image,I love teddy bears and collect them.

Artist Reply: thank you Ruth