Very good coloring and shading. Nice details in the leaves. You might add a touch of yellow at the bloom line where it seperates into the greens, as the yellow is over the green not under it~ Also the upper petal [10 o'clock position) the green triangular spot is detracting next ti the white that connects the 10 o'clock petal with the 9o'clock petal, I would suggest trying another jpeg of this filling that lighter part in green and the green with some shaded yellows.
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AVE HURLEY 24 Mar 2008
Very good coloring and shading. Nice details in the leaves. You might add a touch of yellow at the bloom line where it seperates into the greens, as the yellow is over the green not under it~ Also the upper petal [10 o'clock position) the green triangular spot is detracting next ti the white that connects the 10 o'clock petal with the 9o'clock petal, I would suggest trying another jpeg of this filling that lighter part in green and the green with some shaded yellows.Ginger Lovellette 28 Jun 2006
Really wonderful, Donald!Cathie Brock 26 Jun 2006
Just great Ben...Cath xxxbianca thomas 26 Jun 2006
very artistic and very well done...Armando Salas 26 Jun 2006
Luv this series